Friday, 31 October 2014

A haunting we will go


What will you be doing for Hallowe'en? Personally, I'll be spending the evening as I always do, with my family, and remembering loved ones who are no longer with us. That's what Hallowe'en means to me. If the veil between the dead and the living is thinner at this time, then what better way to re-connect?

For most people, though, Hallowe'en is about scares and witches and long-legged ghoulies. Children dress up in fancy dress (okay, quite a lot of grown ups dress up too) and pounce at doorbells for sweeties to add to their trick or treat buckets. It's a great way to bring people together.

Just in case you're not heading out on a confectionery rampage though, I thought I'd offer up some suggestions for Hallowe'en reading and viewing.

Scary Books

1. Frankenstein by Mary Shelley - not a light read by any means but incredibly atmospheric and masterly writing with a constant sense of doom.

2. Haunted by James Herbert - plenty of ghosts, betrayal and scares in this one. It was also made into a film which kept reasonably to the book.

3. Cabal by Clive Barker - a story of otherworlders who see us as the terrors. Again, this was made into a film, although it was never as good as the read.

4. Black House by Stephen King and Peter Straub - this was a follow up novel to the jointly written The Talisman, but works as a stand alone read. Murders, monsters and abducted children.

5. It by Stephen King - this had me frightened to look in my fridge for a long time. You'll have to read it to find out why.

Films to watch from behind the couch

1. Evil Dead - I saw this when I was sixteen years old with my then boyfriend (a couple of years older than me) and it reduced me to a quivering wreck, mainly because of the relentless horror with very few breaks for humour or breath. I still don't like cellars.

2. The Exorcist - I saw this one on a first date at a late night Hallowe'en showing. Never saw that guy again.

3. An American Werewolf in London - Again, saw this when I was sixteen or seventeen with then boyfriend. Loved the gruesome transformations, the rotting friend and the Yorkshire tavern at the beginning. Boyfriend wouldn't put his car away in the dark garage that evening.

4. Salem's Lot - Watched this at a friend's house when I was at secondary school. She lived in a tiny village with only one lamp-post. Just as we were settling down to sleep, lights off, we heard a tapping at the window. This was a first floor bedroom and visions of a floating vampire boy of course jumped into our heads. I made my friend go and check. Thankfully, it was only her cat wanting to come in. Phew.

5. The Cabin in the Woods - A more recent horror film. I don't watch much horror nowadays but my husband persuaded me to see this one. Written by Joss Whedon, it probably features every aspect of horror you can imagine and then gives it a Whedon twist.

So there you have it - scares aplenty. However you spend tonight, have a wonderful time.

Tuesday, 28 October 2014

Tuesday Choice Words

Writing can be a lonely business so I was very interested to find out about the latest Writers & Artists video series, 'Write With'. It kicks off with writer, Cesca Major as she begins the second novel in her current series.

'Write With' Cesca Major - Week 1



Monday, 27 October 2014

What have I learned from writing my first novel?


My first children's fantasy novel - Haven: Shadowbinder - is languishing in a drawer (well, actually a folder on my laptop) for a little while and the plan for the follow-up novel (the second in a trilogy) is well on the way, so I thought I'd take a creative breather and look back over how I managed to write my first novel, the challenges and the lessons learned. Here's what I discovered.

The first draft is always going to be rubbish. Think of it as creative brain discharge, a bit gooey, sparse in patches, difficult to see through in others. It doesn't have to be your best, yet. Just get the words out. Throw it all down on the page and then see what you have.

Perseverance is key. There will be days when you doubt yourself, doubt your story, or feel ill. Characters will refuse to talk to you. Plot twists will start to unfurl. It's ok. It's all part of the evolution of your novel. Don't be disheartened. Every writer goes through this so you're in good company.

Make a plan but be flexible. I'm a planner. I set up a chapter plan which I try to follow but I'm happy to throw that plan into disarray if it serves the story I'm writing. The initial first chapter in my novel is now the second. The initial second chapter is now chapter seven. The end of my novel has radically changed (not in the final result but in how I present the aftermath). Your original plan is a brilliant guide for your first draft but after that it can all be changed if it would serve the story to do so.

Sometimes, you need a break. There will be occasions when the words do not flow, when you just can't see your way past an event in your story, when you even have to back track and take a different turn. That's fine. If approaching your novel head-on isn't working, come at it from a different angle. Work on your chapter plan. Do some research. Jump ahead a chapter. Go for a walk/have a bath/have a nap and let the ideas swish around in your brain for a while. Don't make it into a battle when it should be a dance.

A second pair of trusted eyes is a gift. I'm not talking about drastic plastic surgery here. Having a friend, relative or in my case, husband, who is willing to read your work and throw ideas around with you is a wonderful gift to a writer. A recent conversation with my 12 year old daughter over lunch showed me how to move on in my chapter plan (I mean, what do mermaids really want?) and my husband has a way of inspiring my writing and me when I've looked at my novel for so long that I'm blind to it. Make sure these other eyes are trustworthy though, someone who has your best interests at heart.

Constructive criticism is incredibly useful, if a tad painful at times. My husband is my main critiquer (is that a word?). He often throws my mind and my novel into turmoil with his suggestions and comments, but he's usually right to question certain parts of my writing. He makes me think. His comments enable me to look at the novel differently. He refuses to let me be lazy. He also makes me stand up for my novel, defend the parts that I believe don't need to be changed and have faith in myself as a writer.

Get to know your characters but you don't have to trawl through their dirty washing. Now, this is very personal to me. I know that everyone forms their characters in different ways. Some people set up intricate grids that include questions like eye colour, job, attitude to mother, and so on. Personally, this doesn't work for me. I'm not a detail person so maybe that's why. Creating a grid of characteristics leaves me cold. It doesn't give me a feel for each character. Instead, I put the characters in a situation and let their personalities unfold with their actions. Their choices and their pattern of speech inform me who they are. As they tell me things about themselves, I keep a note. Equally, I haven't described all of my characters' physical appearance. We know Blessing is 11 years old and has long hair, for instance, but it doesn't matter whether her eyes are blue or  brown, whether she is tall or short, or any other physical detail. I only include that detail if it serves the character and the story. You'll find no description of my main character, Steve in my first novel, other than that he's 14 years old. That's all we need to know because we see the story through his eyes. Don't over think your characters. Let them tell you who they are.

Believe in yourself. At the end of the day, even those trusted people and critics can't do this for you. You have to see the merit in your writing and in you as a writer. There have been occasions when I've thought, 'Is this any good? Am I any good as a writer?'. It happens to all creatives. Self doubt is part of the package and this is when my second point comes into play - perseverance. Keep at it. Work your way through the doubt, even if it feels like you're just plodding along for the sake of it. It's like that thing they say about how if you act happy, you'll eventually feel happy. It may be fooling yourself to begin with but soon enough it goes beyond that and you actually are happy, and writing well. There are plenty of nay-sayers out there already. Don't buy into their negativity. Believe that you can do it.

Tuesday, 21 October 2014

Tuesday Choice Words

Perseverance. That's what it takes to be a writer. You keep on finding the ideas, pushing them into a write-able shape. You work at the first draft until it's finished. You take out the red pen and push through the re-write, then you keep on polishing and honing until you have a book that you're happy to submit. Phew - I'm exhausted writing about all that perseverance.

In his article, Writing Is Worth It, Simon P Clark writes about this issue from his point of view. It's well worth a read of this post on the Writers & Artists website. Have a look.


Wednesday, 15 October 2014

NaNoWriMo 2014


It's that time of year again, when writers all over the planet dive into the challenge of writing 50,000 words in only a month (November, to be exact). This year, I'm taking part as a way to kickstart my next novel. That leaves me a couple of weeks to finish my initial chapter plan which is already well on the way to being complete.

I've never actually made the 50,000 words. I think, 25,000 was the most I managed one year. This time round though, I have the added motivation of working on the second novel in my trilogy. I'm itching to get started.

If you want to be my writing buddy on the NaNoWriMo website this year, or just want to follow my progress, you can find my NaNo profile here.

Wish me luck.